Yes, I believe

Man that was tough. No one thought I was going to finish let alone win this triathalon.

Thanks ouigoncie for giving me the mental and strength and support to push through the last mile and win the whole thing.

Be clear, be confident and don’t overthink it. The beauty of your story is that it’s going to continue to evolve and your site can evolve with it. Your goal should be to make it feel right for right now. Later will take care of itself. It always does.